The best tips I've come across are 12 Ways to Write a Captivating Bio by Marcie Hill:
1) introduce yourself immediately
2) tell your story - personal & professional stuff, stuffy that made you who you are
3) quantify your results - use numbrs here
4) share your hobbies and volunteer work
5) include a photo
6) brag about your family
7) break the rules of writing - lke starting sentences with verbs, but just don't over do it
8) use a consersational tone
9) add personality - well-chosen, colorful words, a splash of humor, or an occasional metaphor, still remember to not overdo it
10) use active voice & strong verbs
11) vary the sentence length
12) keep paragraphs short
So take these tips into account and succeed in job hunting.
2) tell your story - personal & professional stuff, stuffy that made you who you are
3) quantify your results - use numbrs here
4) share your hobbies and volunteer work
5) include a photo
6) brag about your family
7) break the rules of writing - lke starting sentences with verbs, but just don't over do it
8) use a consersational tone
9) add personality - well-chosen, colorful words, a splash of humor, or an occasional metaphor, still remember to not overdo it
10) use active voice & strong verbs
11) vary the sentence length
12) keep paragraphs short
Good luck.
